"Holding hands, the two gaped wide-eyed at the devastation before them."
The author (my dad ) has gotten a real attachment to this picture. I tried different text arrangements in different colors, but he does not want anything that will obstruct the painting too much or detract from it, and there is no telling him otherwise. Since I'm under eighteen and live in the same house as him, he can really see my progress and give imput more than someone could if I had to exclusively email them mockups. I think he likes the ability to point to colors on my palette and say "Try that one!" but I'm a little stuck if I disagree.
Anyways, I'd really appreciate feedback on this one, both on the text and the painting!